11-13-2014, 12:59 PM
I think it's too long now. At around 1:40 when the music has a bridge bit, that's where I'd stop it. The FBM with the GTI's clip is pretty pointless in my opinion, but the crash you use after it would be a nice ending. Where it lands after spinning, if you had a still shot to the side of it, as it drives off, fade to black and that would be a good way to end it.
AA™| RatRug